Age/Gender: 41, Male
Location: CT
Job: not worth mentioning
i play with flash when i get a break from the job or all the bands i'm in.
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Great look, great style. Now for the critique. The text was way to small on the loading page. You could maybe set it up as a 2 or 3 frame movie clip with a 'next' button so it would be more legible. Also, you need more establishing shots (I violate that rule myself all the time). Sometimes I wasn't sure what was going on at first because the scene started with a close-up and opening scenes sometimes need to be pulled back, even for a second, so the viewer can understand what's up. But still, overall great work and I'm looking forward to the next. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
You're absolutely right, I'll work on putting more establishing shots in future episodes. I found close-ups easier to draw & animate, that's why there's so many of them.
Thanks for the review!
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I'll bet if you had the two of them whipping out ak-47's and wasting everything in sight you wouldn't have gotten suspended. Remember, this is America, violence good, sex bad.
Nice Job! I'm laughing! Your school sucks.
Author's Response:
Naw, my school's pretty tolerant. Its probably the fact that a talking DICK was telling kids that big cool dicks are good. Just a thought.
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I like, I like! Just a heads up, you've got a typo on the 'voices in your head' screen at the beginning. It says 'voicerover.' Make 'em faster so I have something to watch when I'm procrastinating.
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