Great look, great style. Now for the critique. The text was way to small on the loading page. You could maybe set it up as a 2 or 3 frame movie clip with a 'next' button so it would be more legible. Also, you need more establishing shots (I violate that rule myself all the time). Sometimes I wasn't sure what was going on at first because the scene started with a close-up and opening scenes sometimes need to be pulled back, even for a second, so the viewer can understand what's up. But still, overall great work and I'm looking forward to the next. Keep it up!
You're absolutely right, I'll work on putting more establishing shots in future episodes. I found close-ups easier to draw & animate, that's why there's so many of them.
Thanks for the review!
I'll bet if you had the two of them whipping out ak-47's and wasting everything in sight you wouldn't have gotten suspended. Remember, this is America, violence good, sex bad.
Nice Job! I'm laughing! Your school sucks.
Naw, my school's pretty tolerant. Its probably the fact that a talking DICK was telling kids that big cool dicks are good. Just a thought.
I like, I like! Just a heads up, you've got a typo on the 'voices in your head' screen at the beginning. It says 'voicerover.' Make 'em faster so I have something to watch when I'm procrastinating.
As an American....
...I'd just like to say we don't ALL hate Arabs and Muslims. Voices of sanity and reason don't make for good television and radio, so only the ignorant loud-mouths get heard. People are the same no matter where you go. Some suck, and some are cool. Politicians and world leaders, however, are the ones that cause ALL the major problems, so I reserve my hate for them. Now that the politics are out of the way....
Awesome animation! Fun game! I'm gonna watch it again and lose this time so I can see what happens.
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